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[12 Aug 2010 | One Comment | 24 views]

 
These are images from my recent Fine Art Nude Workshop, taken by Richard.  After every workshop attendees can submit images for critique and follow-up.
 

 
Lovely.  Only comment is that I would bring up the light levels in the left corners just to balance the overall light tones of the image.
 
 
Equally lovely, the drape looks great, the pose is lovely, Leah looks lovely.
 
In this case the dark base works because it provides a base for the image.
 
 
 
 
 
These two images are of course the same just rotated, I understand the thinking about …

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[18 May 2010 | 33 views]

 
These are Ian’s pictures taken during the recent RPS workshop with myself, Graham Whistler and Clive Haynes.   After every workshop I run attendees can send me images for review once they’ve had a chance to edit and post-process them.
 

Here we have two crops and tones of the same image.   I really like the black and white image, but the colour one has a really odd colour cast to it.
 
Looking at the set as a whole I’m not sure if this is a deliberate choice, an incorrect setting of …

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[10 May 2010 | One Comment | 42 views]

This is a critique of images for Richard, following a recent Royal Photographic Society workshop.  All my workshop attendees can send images for critique after the workshop as I believe this is a vital part of the workshop process.

Nice mono image, nicely shot into the darker “short” side of the torso.  I like the whole pose and the framing to the right of the image. 
 
I think you’ve caught the wrong moment here, it looks like you’ve just missed the smile and it’s about to fade, so what you’re left with …

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[10 May 2010 | 41 views]

After every workshop I give the opportunity for attendees to send me a selection of images, so that they can be reviewed and advice given.  These are Robert’s selection:

 Nice portrait, interesting and quite cheeky look on Miss Pixie’s face.  Crucially the frames of the glasses do not obscure the pupils of the eye.
 
 Interesting idea, I can’t fault the idea of montaging these images.  However, I’m really unhappy about the zoom blur (or whatever the effect is).  Don’t see how this adds to the image.  The thing about a treatment like …

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[10 May 2010 | 2 Comments | 18 views]

 After every workshop I give the opportunity for attendees to send me a selection of images, so that they can be reviewed and advice given.  These are Robert’s selection:
  
 Hmm, this lighting is really setup for a full length body image and with this close-up of the face it really highlights the flaws as well as being in a slightly odd direction.
 
The pose on this, maybe combined with a wider-angle zoom has led this pose to look very big around the hips.  I do love the soft gentle wrap of the right …

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