Critique for KevinH

Not the best of the set. The crop cuts out the edge of her elbow and the partially covered eye does not work well here.

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Whereas this is much better. As we discussed on the day the pose reflects the triangle of the drape behind so re-inforces both. It's a shame its not central.

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Nice and delicate posting below. The eyes are a little dark, you could use photoshop to bring them out a little more. The stray hair on the forehead is irritating. I would clone out the dark edge on the right hand side. Nice control of depth of field.

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Image overall is too dark, but very recoverable, bring up the exposure on this image and you'll get a much nicer and flattering shot. Lovely shadows around the cheekbones.

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Shame about the dark area in the top left corner. Otherwise a very sweet, delicate and warm capture. The eyes would be better if they were completely closed.

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Nice and cheeky look, again a shame that they eye is so covered on the left, this would have been so much better if the eye was more clearly visible. The backdrop here works much better and gives a really nice "lifestyle" look

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